Very good story very descriptive
good work
I liked the story. It hooked me in
next time try and put it on the same line Yassine
Hi Yassine, This was an original way to respond to the prompt, I can imagine how frustrated you were at not being able to turn on the TV. Next time make sure your tenses aren’t confused.
Mrs Moore
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Very good story very descriptive
good work
I liked the story. It hooked me in
next time try and put it on the same line Yassine
Hi Yassine,
This was an original way to respond to the prompt, I can imagine how frustrated you were at not being able to turn on the TV.
Next time make sure your tenses aren’t confused.
Mrs Moore