It hooked me in
Your work is very intriguing keep up the good work
OH MY THAT IS SO GOOD I WISH I COULD WRITE A STORY LIKE THAT
Hi Robert,
What a clever way of using the senses to creat suspense! You leave me asking lots of questions, which is what talented writers do. Next time try not to jump between tenses as it is confusing. Mrs Moore
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It hooked me in
Your work is very intriguing keep up the good work
OH MY THAT IS SO GOOD I WISH I COULD WRITE A STORY LIKE THAT
Hi Robert,
What a clever way of using the senses to creat suspense! You leave me asking lots of questions, which is what talented writers do.
Next time try not to jump between tenses as it is confusing.
Mrs Moore