I really enjoyed reading this; your message about the turtle really made me stop and think. This is something that talented writers are able to do. Next time take the time to read it back before you publish to check for errors.
Hello Oliver,
So you liked the turtle or not?
You found you inner Ionescou style- thinking about abract events, stuff that is seemingly happening- or not and quite unrelated. I like it!
How about not rushing all the time? As you say turtles are interesting, maybe other things are also interesting that donw seem so to the first look.
Hi Oliver,
I like turtles too. However, it sounds like there might be other animals that you like better? Or were you not interested at first and then discovered that turtles are awesome during your visit?
Your writing certainly made me think about how I feel about turtles, so thank you!
Minor point – Remember to make sure you put your friends first when you write, rather than ‘me and my friends’.
Thank you,
Michelle Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia
Hi Oliver,
I really enjoyed reading this; your message about the turtle really made me stop and think. This is something that talented writers are able to do. Next time take the time to read it back before you publish to check for errors.
Mrs Moore
Hello Oliver,
So you liked the turtle or not?
You found you inner Ionescou style- thinking about abract events, stuff that is seemingly happening- or not and quite unrelated. I like it!
How about not rushing all the time? As you say turtles are interesting, maybe other things are also interesting that donw seem so to the first look.
Hi Oliver,
I like turtles too. However, it sounds like there might be other animals that you like better? Or were you not interested at first and then discovered that turtles are awesome during your visit?
Your writing certainly made me think about how I feel about turtles, so thank you!
Minor point – Remember to make sure you put your friends first when you write, rather than ‘me and my friends’.
Thank you,
Michelle Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia