Oh Alessio, this was a wonderfully graphic and scary response to the prompt. I don’t even want to think about what those terrifying screams sounded like. A quick tip for next time would be to check your capitals before you publish.
Keep up the great writing.
Karin Poole
USA
Hi Alessio,
I really enjoyed reading this; you included lots of fabulous detail that really drew me in and helped me to picture the scene in my mind. Next time make sure you check it over before you publish. Well done, you should feel proud of this work.
Mrs Moore
Oh Alessio, this was a wonderfully graphic and scary response to the prompt. I don’t even want to think about what those terrifying screams sounded like. A quick tip for next time would be to check your capitals before you publish.
Keep up the great writing.
Karin Poole
USA
Hi Alessio,
I really enjoyed reading this; you included lots of fabulous detail that really drew me in and helped me to picture the scene in my mind. Next time make sure you check it over before you publish. Well done, you should feel proud of this work.
Mrs Moore