Well that sounds like a quite a memorable trip to the zoo, I can imagine just how terrified you were when you saw that lion on the loose. Next time try to include more descriptive detail to help your reader picture things in their mind.
Keep on writing.
Mrs M
PS I think you mean ‘pothole’; a port hole is a small round window on a boat
Hi Anojan,
Well that sounds like a quite a memorable trip to the zoo, I can imagine just how terrified you were when you saw that lion on the loose. Next time try to include more descriptive detail to help your reader picture things in their mind.
Keep on writing.
Mrs M
PS I think you mean ‘pothole’; a port hole is a small round window on a boat