Mia this is a wonderful piece of writing and an example of just how far you have come this year, you use precise vocabulary and detail to draw me into your story and influence my opinion. Now you need to think about paragraphing. Mrs M
Okay I will think about paragraphing.
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Mia this is a wonderful piece of writing and an example of just how far you have come this year, you use precise vocabulary and detail to draw me into your story and influence my opinion. Now you need to think about paragraphing.
Mrs M
Okay I will think about paragraphing.