What an unusual response to the picture this week. You have a very strong idea that you have developed and thank you for adding a title to your writing, I always like that as it gets my mind already wondering what the story will be about.
Well done for managing to write an entire story in just 100 words, it is hard to do and it shows how well you had planned and crafted your idea to ensure it fitted.
Well done! I love your descriptive writing. Your story is very imaginative, with good powerful words. I wonder vwhat happened next. It really hooked me in. I am really eager to find out what happens next
Hello
I love this just so GOOD
Keep on writing!
Somran
Hi Prithikaa
What an unusual response to the picture this week. You have a very strong idea that you have developed and thank you for adding a title to your writing, I always like that as it gets my mind already wondering what the story will be about.
Well done for managing to write an entire story in just 100 words, it is hard to do and it shows how well you had planned and crafted your idea to ensure it fitted.
Keep it up!
Miss T team 100wc
Hampshire
Well done! I love your descriptive writing. Your story is very imaginative, with good powerful words. I wonder vwhat happened next. It really hooked me in. I am really eager to find out what happens next
Keep Writing!
Ratheena 🙂 5A
well done prithikaa, a great use of descriptive language and a good start to hook me in.