Oh no! I hope your family are ok Gharish! I like the way you built up the tension and then left your reader with a horrible thought that they will wonder about. You also used thought well to create empathy in your reader.
Next time check your words fit the context.
Hey
Why is the title Called the End?
Somran
Oh no! I hope your family are ok Gharish! I like the way you built up the tension and then left your reader with a horrible thought that they will wonder about. You also used thought well to create empathy in your reader.
Next time check your words fit the context.
hi gharish I liked when you wrote the rain was thundering down the road