Hi Arafah,❄️
What a spooky but great story.
I liked it when at first Chelea was there but when you looked back she was gone it made it really scary
but it didn’t scare me now way. I now how hard it is to write a 100 word story especially if you want a shiver
running down your readers spine but I think you’v made a scary enough story to win the 100wc.
From your friend Romasa
Arafah,
What a great job! Be sure to proofread your piece before you post your work. You have some run-on sentences that you may have been able to correct after reading this aloud. Also be sure to punctuate dialogue properly.
When I caught up to her, she took her hood off. ”Did you miss me?” she said. “What’s wrong? Why don’t you come back with me?” I said .
Well done Arafah, you’ve sequenced events really well in this story. Next time remember to include more of the prompt.
Miss A
Hi Arafah,❄️
What a spooky but great story.
I liked it when at first Chelea was there but when you looked back she was gone it made it really scary
but it didn’t scare me now way. I now how hard it is to write a 100 word story especially if you want a shiver
running down your readers spine but I think you’v made a scary enough story to win the 100wc.
From your friend Romasa
Arafah,
What a great job! Be sure to proofread your piece before you post your work. You have some run-on sentences that you may have been able to correct after reading this aloud. Also be sure to punctuate dialogue properly.
When I caught up to her, she took her hood off. ”Did you miss me?” she said. “What’s wrong? Why don’t you come back with me?” I said .
Keep up the great work!