A good story, Zia! A shiver went down my spine too when I was reading it! Well done! Mrs. Ciobanu
Hello Zia WOW! Amazing loved it ALL, You describe the story so well it comes in the readers head Well done!! From Somran
Brilliant Zia, I really love the way you used feelings to draw me into your story. Keep up the great work, I’m really proud of you. Miss A
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A good story, Zia! A shiver went down my spine too when I was reading it! Well done!
Mrs. Ciobanu
Hello Zia
WOW! Amazing loved it ALL,
You describe the story so well it comes in the readers head
Well done!!
From Somran
Brilliant Zia, I really love the way you used feelings to draw me into your story.
Keep up the great work, I’m really proud of you.
Miss A