the horror by amina

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4 Responses to the horror by amina

  1. nanand says:

    Amina this is an exciting Halloween story in response to the prompt. Lets work at using connectives to extend your sentences.
    Miss A

    • hussa says:

      ok and thanks. I got some words mixed up and the monsters didn’t eat Halloween they ate Sam and Oliver I got a bit confused.

  2. munir says:

    Hi Amina, ❄️
    That was a amazing story . That was a spooky story you rote and a good one.
    I keep on wondering what happend to Sam and Oliver did they ever escape? Did the monster thort they were sandwiches ?
    or did there mother came to the rescue and wak him on his tummy? Or mabe there mother told the monsters mummy about what he did? Next time when you wite a spooky story make shiver runing down my back ok.
    From your friend Romasa

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