Wow! What a spooky story Adem! You used dialogue well to draw me into your story. Remember to punctuate questions and think about how you are suing speech marks
I like the way you made the frozen figures vanish like spooookyyy gghhhooosssstsss. Just so you know you should check some spellings such as SOUL and some missing punctuation.
love your story adem but where’s the prompt
Wow! What a spooky story Adem! You used dialogue well to draw me into your story. Remember to punctuate questions and think about how you are suing speech marks
hello Adem
this is a great idea but you could use a better word than said because you used it around three time.
great work.
keep writing.
James 5A
I like the way you made the frozen figures vanish like spooookyyy gghhhooosssstsss. Just so you know you should check some spellings such as SOUL and some missing punctuation.