A great entry in this week’s 100 WC! I really like the way you have used the prompt and you’re thinking carefully about your writing. You are thinking hard about inverted commas for speech.
Well done. Keep up the hard work.
Mrs N Goulbourne, Team 100, Liverpool, UK
Hi Esha, thank you for sharing your 100WC with the world. I liked your idea behind this story and really want to know what happened after reading the note – it is great to leave your reader wondering what happens next and wanting more. Some adventurous word choices too. Keep writing 🙂
I liked your suspenseful tale! It makes the reader want to continue! Keep on writing!
A great entry in this week’s 100 WC! I really like the way you have used the prompt and you’re thinking carefully about your writing. You are thinking hard about inverted commas for speech.
Well done. Keep up the hard work.
Mrs N Goulbourne, Team 100, Liverpool, UK
Hi Esha, thank you for sharing your 100WC with the world. I liked your idea behind this story and really want to know what happened after reading the note – it is great to leave your reader wondering what happens next and wanting more. Some adventurous word choices too. Keep writing 🙂