Thank you for your entry this week. You have used a wide range of adjectives that help the reader to make a picture in their mind. For your next 100 WC try to make sure your story leads somewhere, perhaps leave us with a cliffhanger or ensure there is an interesting complication and resolution.
Hi Karolina,
Thank you for your entry this week. You have used a wide range of adjectives that help the reader to make a picture in their mind. For your next 100 WC try to make sure your story leads somewhere, perhaps leave us with a cliffhanger or ensure there is an interesting complication and resolution.
Keep writing!