Hi Somran – greetings from suburban Chicago, IL USA
An imaginative use of the prompt this week, especially your opening sentences. The reader is left wondering what happened, the family gone, the house gone. And again at the end you left the reader wondering what happened, who died? It sure is a mystery. Keep writing!
Lovely use of the prompt Somran. The vocab you have chosen and the way you have varied you’re sentence length has created a very lonely and ghostly atmosphere that draws the reader in. Lots of rhetorical question that I wonder, will we ever know the answer to? Well done on a very enjoyable 100WC
Hi Somran – greetings from suburban Chicago, IL USA
An imaginative use of the prompt this week, especially your opening sentences. The reader is left wondering what happened, the family gone, the house gone. And again at the end you left the reader wondering what happened, who died? It sure is a mystery. Keep writing!
Hi miss,
Thank you so much for writing in my work!
I hope you enjoyed my work,
Thank you
From Somran
Lovely use of the prompt Somran. The vocab you have chosen and the way you have varied you’re sentence length has created a very lonely and ghostly atmosphere that draws the reader in. Lots of rhetorical question that I wonder, will we ever know the answer to? Well done on a very enjoyable 100WC
Hi miss,
Thank you for your wonderful comments,
I hope you enjoyed my work
From Somran