hamzah dd

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2 Responses to hamzah dd

  1. nanand says:

    Brilliant Hamzah, I love the way you used an introduction to create action and leave me intrigued about the back story of your character.Remember to use the past perfect ( Had + past participle= had escaped) to describe an action that occurred in the past of the past.
    Miss A

  2. achoh says:

    Hi my names is hamza in 5b.well done hamzah
    You did in proving lot

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