Wow! I really like how you have used interesting language to create a picture in the readers head! It made me get off the edge of my seat! I also like how you have used advance punctuation like ellipsis. I think you could’ve used brackets. From Sara
It was Absolutely brilliant Ratheeena I really loved your story
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Wow! I really like how you have used interesting language to create a picture in the readers head! It made me get off the edge of my seat! I also like how you have used advance punctuation like ellipsis. I think you could’ve used brackets.
From Sara
It was Absolutely brilliant
Ratheeena I really loved your story