Great stuff Irina, I love the way you explained the way your day unfolded; I hope your mum comes back soon.
Next time remember to think about your spelling.
Keep rising to the challenge.
Miss A
Team 100 WC London
How very sporty of you to get up out of bed and immediately do your stretching and exercises! I love blue jays, they’re very colorful even if they’re only mostly blue. Be careful with your spellings–“brakefast” should be “breakfast” and from the prompt “plan” should be “plane”. Keep up the writing and you will get better with time, great job!!
I really like your story Irina! Its fantastic! Although, I can see you have spelt some words incorrectly. Such as, brakefast which is breakfast. For next time improve on your spelling. On the other hand well done!
From Sara
Great stuff Irina, I love the way you explained the way your day unfolded; I hope your mum comes back soon.
Next time remember to think about your spelling.
Keep rising to the challenge.
Miss A
Team 100 WC London
Hi Irina,
How very sporty of you to get up out of bed and immediately do your stretching and exercises! I love blue jays, they’re very colorful even if they’re only mostly blue. Be careful with your spellings–“brakefast” should be “breakfast” and from the prompt “plan” should be “plane”. Keep up the writing and you will get better with time, great job!!
Joe Pasternak (Team 100WC)
Dublin, Ireland
I really like your story Irina! Its fantastic! Although, I can see you have spelt some words incorrectly. Such as, brakefast which is breakfast. For next time improve on your spelling. On the other hand well done!
From Sara
I enjoyed reading your work. I liked how you hooked the reader in .
Well Done
good work Irina but you really need to improve on your spellings!
good work Irina but you really need to improve on your spellings.