You have a great piece of work I like it when you described the gun
U have included a lot of action in your story. You have put a few spelling mistakes like Pilates it should be pilot’s but any way your story was brilliant Yo.
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You have a great piece of work I like it when you described the gun
U have included a lot of action in your story. You have put a few spelling mistakes like Pilates it should be pilot’s but any way your story was brilliant Yo.