You have interesting ideas, Nayan, and you did a nice job working the prompt into an interesting story line. However, your lack of capital letters made this a little hard to read. Remember to proofread so you show us your best work. I do love a happy ending, and I hope you continue to enter the 100 Word Challenge, because good writers should share what they do.
I loved your story. Good effort. Well done on working the prompt into this imaginative story. Remember that punctuation goes just after a word and then a space is needed-A space is not needed before and after the fullstop, comma or semicolon. ‘Plane’ is spelt with an e at the end.
You have interesting ideas, Nayan, and you did a nice job working the prompt into an interesting story line. However, your lack of capital letters made this a little hard to read. Remember to proofread so you show us your best work. I do love a happy ending, and I hope you continue to enter the 100 Word Challenge, because good writers should share what they do.
Try make the i into I next time. and spelling
Try make the i into I next time. and spelling as well try make sense out of it
I loved your story. Good effort. Well done on working the prompt into this imaginative story. Remember that punctuation goes just after a word and then a space is needed-A space is not needed before and after the fullstop, comma or semicolon. ‘Plane’ is spelt with an e at the end.