Adeeba- A very good story which includes the phrase given. You have used speech effectively and the characters come across well. The flickering light sounds mysterious and I would like to know what it was! Well done! Val
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Adeeba- A very good story which includes the phrase given. You have used speech effectively and the characters come across well. The flickering light sounds mysterious and I would like to know what it was! Well done! Val