Great and very imaginative story Aadeeb. I really did enjoy reading through and I cannot imagine ow I would feel if I saw an Alien spacecraft! Try and keep an eye on spelling for example: there should be they’re. Also, try and use different words if you can to avoid repetition. Well done, great work, keep writing 🙂
Great and very imaginative story Aadeeb. I really did enjoy reading through and I cannot imagine ow I would feel if I saw an Alien spacecraft! Try and keep an eye on spelling for example: there should be they’re. Also, try and use different words if you can to avoid repetition. Well done, great work, keep writing 🙂