OH my, what a spooky story Gharish! I wonder why the boys went in when there was a dead horses’ head, that would have made me swim for my life in the other direction, and what a scary end.
Next time think about creating more flow and linking events for your reader.
Miss A
OH my, what a spooky story Gharish! I wonder why the boys went in when there was a dead horses’ head, that would have made me swim for my life in the other direction, and what a scary end.
Next time think about creating more flow and linking events for your reader.
Miss A