Oh Alex! Couldn’t he have waited till the emerald came out of the other end of the horse rather than kill it?
I can see you really worked hard at your punctuation this week and I love all your detail.
Think about how you can hook in your reader more quickly at the start.
Miss A
Oh Alex! Couldn’t he have waited till the emerald came out of the other end of the horse rather than kill it?
I can see you really worked hard at your punctuation this week and I love all your detail.
Think about how you can hook in your reader more quickly at the start.
Miss A
Wow Alex , I agree with Miss anand and how he killed the horse.was he emotional when he realized he hurt his animal