An amazing story Ratheena! I wonder what is going to happen next! I have notice some mistakes such as vains which is actually spelt as veins and the structure of the sentence. For example: Whistles of the sweet tunes in bird. That doesn’t really make sense.
An amazing story Ratheena! I wonder what is going to happen next! I have notice some mistakes such as vains which is actually spelt as veins and the structure of the sentence. For example: Whistles of the sweet tunes in bird. That doesn’t really make sense.
From Sara