Hey Zaynab, its me Adz . That was the best story I’ve commented on . Keep up the good work!
I like your story Zaynab, I like how you have used interesting words. Maybe you can change the word person as you have been using it a lot of times. Also the ending is spooky maybe you can add some ellipsis, to create more spookiness. From Sara 😉
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Hey Zaynab, its me Adz . That was the best story I’ve commented on . Keep up the good work!
I like your story Zaynab, I like how you have used interesting words. Maybe you can change the word person as you have been using it a lot of times. Also the ending is spooky maybe you can add some ellipsis, to create more spookiness.
From Sara 😉