A spectacular story Malaika! I like how you have added onomatopheia. Some words you have tiny mistakes like pop corn, popcorn is one word. Also in one sentence you’ve added a dash and then a fullstop.
From Sara
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A spectacular story Malaika! I like how you have added onomatopheia. Some words you have tiny mistakes like pop corn, popcorn is one word. Also in one sentence you’ve added a dash and then a fullstop.
From Sara