I really loved your interesting story.
you had some great description which painted a clear picture in my head.
remember when you write number don’t write them in figures.
Wow- what a crazy life. Your writing is full of wonderful ideas about your life. Think carefully about your connectives and do they always link your ideas.
I really loved your interesting story.
you had some great description which painted a clear picture in my head.
remember when you write number don’t write them in figures.
Wow- what a crazy life. Your writing is full of wonderful ideas about your life. Think carefully about your connectives and do they always link your ideas.