Good work Karolina, this is definitely a better story than your old 100 word challenges. In your first sentence you put it was dark as instead you should have put it was AS dark as. Try not to use Karolina a lot instead you should try they or the girl or I if you wrote it in first person. Zaeem G 🙂 :p
Good work Karolina, this is definitely a better story than your old 100 word challenges. In your first sentence you put it was dark as instead you should have put it was AS dark as. Try not to use Karolina a lot instead you should try they or the girl or I if you wrote it in first person. Zaeem G 🙂 :p
Karolina, make sure that you do not keep on using Karolina a lot. As well as that pay attention to your past and present tense.
From Sachien5B