I like the twist you built into your story using the prompt, especially the impact of being small. When you added descriptive words, they made your story more interesting to read.
Hi Arafah,
What a lovely 100 Word Challenge entry. I love stories that are imaginative and yours certainly is…fairies in the garden…what a sweet idea. By using the prompt as your opening sentence you really threw the readers straight into your story, which is a really good idea, especially when you have only 100 words.
You clearly write as you imagine scenes in your mind, don’t forget all your sense….also think about using a thesaurus to help you think of different words for things.
This was a lovely piece to read Arafah, keep up the good work.
great job Arafah. good story plan . Though you need to check you spelling and punctuation.
Hi Arafah,
I like the twist you built into your story using the prompt, especially the impact of being small. When you added descriptive words, they made your story more interesting to read.
Ms. Sargent
Team 100 WC–USA
Hi Arafah,
What a lovely 100 Word Challenge entry. I love stories that are imaginative and yours certainly is…fairies in the garden…what a sweet idea. By using the prompt as your opening sentence you really threw the readers straight into your story, which is a really good idea, especially when you have only 100 words.
You clearly write as you imagine scenes in your mind, don’t forget all your sense….also think about using a thesaurus to help you think of different words for things.
This was a lovely piece to read Arafah, keep up the good work.