What bad luck the two boys had, but of course, they should have made better decisions all along, shouldn’t they? I liked the places where you used descriptive language like ‘smashed,’ ‘piercing blue,’ ‘dressed in pitch black.’ They made your story more interesting to read.
Hi Gharish,
What bad luck the two boys had, but of course, they should have made better decisions all along, shouldn’t they? I liked the places where you used descriptive language like ‘smashed,’ ‘piercing blue,’ ‘dressed in pitch black.’ They made your story more interesting to read.
Ms. Sargent
Team 100 WC–USA