Thank you for your entry in the 100wc this week. You gave used the prompt well to write an entertaining story. I like how you have used similes and some dialogue to make it interesting for us to read. It is very important that you put in the full stops and capital letters to show the beginning and end of sentences because it made your writing hard for me to read. Keep up the good work.
Nice 100 word challenge Harry Potter (Joke, ha ha ha). You have a brilliant imagination. Just check for missing punctuation such as COMMAS
GREAT! This is GREAT! check your capital letters . I really want to know the next part of your story and be amazed and shocked.
by janna =)
Hi Harry,
Thank you for your entry in the 100wc this week. You gave used the prompt well to write an entertaining story. I like how you have used similes and some dialogue to make it interesting for us to read. It is very important that you put in the full stops and capital letters to show the beginning and end of sentences because it made your writing hard for me to read. Keep up the good work.
Mrs McG (team 100wc)
Derbyshire, England