Hi Jayanna,
I really love your story,
I like the way you set out your story nice and clearly,
you left a very good question at the end of your story
From Somran
There were many surprises in this 100 word challenge, Jayanna, and the ending left me with a big question mark over my head! I like that you’ve picked some great verbs, such as “giggling” and “yanked”. Don’t forget to check with “there/their/they’re” you should be using – I think you got this confused a few times! Keep up the great and mysterious writing!
Very Well Done!
Miss Summon A Door
Excellent Work on your story.
I’d like a mystery as Mrs Mystery
Hi Jayanna,
I really love your story,
I like the way you set out your story nice and clearly,
you left a very good question at the end of your story
From Somran
There were many surprises in this 100 word challenge, Jayanna, and the ending left me with a big question mark over my head! I like that you’ve picked some great verbs, such as “giggling” and “yanked”. Don’t forget to check with “there/their/they’re” you should be using – I think you got this confused a few times! Keep up the great and mysterious writing!