Ramasa your words delivered such wisdom and helpful in understanding the intensity of the tragedy. You sure got a telent and you are using it well. Keep it up
A beautiful piece to remind us of the tragedy that war brings. I really liked that you tried to use similes to make your writing have more of an impact. Excellent work!
Well done Romasa, you made really good use of similes and descriptive language to get your message across to your reader. Keep it up!
Ramasa your words delivered such wisdom and helpful in understanding the intensity of the tragedy. You sure got a telent and you are using it well. Keep it up
Well done . keep writing 🙂
This is excellent writing. Bravo!
Love your style.
Well done (y)
beautiful words,little angle.
emotional thoughts & beautiful writing, keep it up
Hi Romasa,
I like the way that you end your work with a question!
You also used lots of emotive language.
By: Prithikaa
Hi Romasa,
A beautiful piece to remind us of the tragedy that war brings. I really liked that you tried to use similes to make your writing have more of an impact. Excellent work!
beautiful words,little angle.