Safwan some really emotive phrasing in a beautiful poem which reminds us why we should remember. I especially liked all your vivid description and the line ‘ a poppy slowly popped out of the ground’. Remember to keep focussed till the end as your last lines don’t match what has come before
An wonderful and emotional description of the event that took place in the life of a soldier, which many of us may find difficult to imagine. well done Safwan and keep focused.
Safwan some really emotive phrasing in a beautiful poem which reminds us why we should remember. I especially liked all your vivid description and the line ‘ a poppy slowly popped out of the ground’. Remember to keep focussed till the end as your last lines don’t match what has come before
Safwan, You’ve written a very vivid piece. I love the way you have written in fragments – it has made your piece full of emotion. Well done!
An wonderful and emotional description of the event that took place in the life of a soldier, which many of us may find difficult to imagine. well done Safwan and keep focused.