You have an interesting premise Madiha. Try to concentrate on your grammar and punctuation and think about how you want your reader to feel.
WELL DONE MABYE TO PERFECT IT CORRECT YOUR GRAMMAR AND PUCTUATION AND ADLECTIVES
it was good I think you have to add some punctuation and adjectives to make it interesting
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You have an interesting premise Madiha. Try to concentrate on your grammar and punctuation and think about how you want your reader to feel.
WELL DONE
MABYE TO PERFECT IT CORRECT YOUR GRAMMAR AND PUCTUATION AND ADLECTIVES
it was good I think you have to add some punctuation and adjectives to make it interesting
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