Very good poem. Well done.
thank you.
wow brilliant that was the best poem I have ever read you are really a roll model in the class well done in class keep your work like this!!!!!!!!!!
well done aiza this is a brilliant piece of work well done
I really like this poem of yours aiza
well done aiza. I love this this poem and you have thought about it
I loved it! The rhyming makes sense. The only thing I didn’t understand was the world that u lay what you wrote. From Vicky at Mead Primary School
What does the world you lay mean
Luke(: Tulay<3
It means that the world that we live in
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Very good poem. Well done.
thank you.
wow brilliant that was the best poem I have ever read you are really a roll model in the class well done in class keep your work like this!!!!!!!!!!
well done aiza this is a brilliant piece of work well done
I really like this poem of yours aiza
well done aiza. I love this this poem and you have thought about it
I loved it! The rhyming makes sense. The only thing I didn’t understand was the world that u lay what you wrote. From Vicky at Mead Primary School
What does the world you lay mean
Luke(: Tulay<3
It means that the world that we live in