Great stuff Gharish, I love how you used thought to create empathy in your reader well done. Please make time you edit before you publish as there are punctuation errors in this that I know you recognise.
Gharish, it would be remarkable to have such a childhood friend as the one you have described in your story. I really liked your ending where the world lives in peace…….
Remember to check for punctuation before publishing as it is easier for your readers. Well done.
Great stuff Gharish, I love how you used thought to create empathy in your reader well done. Please make time you edit before you publish as there are punctuation errors in this that I know you recognise.
Gharish, it would be remarkable to have such a childhood friend as the one you have described in your story. I really liked your ending where the world lives in peace…….
Remember to check for punctuation before publishing as it is easier for your readers. Well done.