Wow! What an incredible turnaround from such a small thing, it goes to show that sometimes the smallest things can remind us about the important things in life. Well done.
Next time remember to check before you publish, there are some errors.
Hello,
Somran I loved your work, it was vere presentable, greate use of words. WOW! Keep up all the good work!
Next time check for grammar, Loved your work
Hello Somran,
WOW! Well done amazing start to this descriptive story.
I loved how a talking parrot changed the Lord decistion to make the world a better place, my favorite sentence is I have to change.
Make sure next time to cheek for grammar mistakes.
Wow! What an incredible turnaround from such a small thing, it goes to show that sometimes the smallest things can remind us about the important things in life. Well done.
Next time remember to check before you publish, there are some errors.
Hello,
Somran I loved your work, it was vere presentable, greate use of words. WOW! Keep up all the good work!
Next time check for grammar, Loved your work
Love Sadaf And Yalda
Hello Somran,
WOW! Well done amazing start to this descriptive story.
I loved how a talking parrot changed the Lord decistion to make the world a better place, my favorite sentence is I have to change.
Make sure next time to cheek for grammar mistakes.
From Sahar