surabhi100 wc

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4 Responses to surabhi100 wc

  1. nanand says:

    Well done Surabhi, you used precise language well to paint a picture for your reader. Check your prepositions are correct.

  2. Gaurav says:

    Very nice collection of word and comprehension. Well done Surabhi

  3. Mrs T ( Team 100 WC) says:

    What a fantastic piece of writing Surahbi. You created vivid images for the reader, combined with an entertaining plot. Well done!

    Mrs T ( team 100 WC tullycrew@edublogs.org)

  4. suthl says:

    well done subrabhi. you have really used great vocabulary. next time try using extended noun phrases and describe the lord of nulth a bit more .

    by: lakshithaa

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