This was an interesting way to respond to the prompt. You structured your writing really well, with a clear beginning, middle and end. Next time check that your tenses match, you’re jumping between the past and present which can confuse your reader.
Mrs Moore
I find your story very interesting! You are so creative. However, be careful with the use of tenses and capital letters.
Keep writing and inspiring others to write!
Best wishes,
Miss Milena
I find you story very interesting. I like the way you used the prompt given. However, be careful with the use of tenses and capital letters.
Keep writing and inspiring others to write!
Best wishes,
Miss Milena
Hi Furqan,
This was an interesting way to respond to the prompt. You structured your writing really well, with a clear beginning, middle and end. Next time check that your tenses match, you’re jumping between the past and present which can confuse your reader.
Mrs Moore
Hi Furqan,
I find your story very interesting! You are so creative. However, be careful with the use of tenses and capital letters.
Keep writing and inspiring others to write!
Best wishes,
Miss Milena
Hi Furqan,
I find you story very interesting. I like the way you used the prompt given. However, be careful with the use of tenses and capital letters.
Keep writing and inspiring others to write!
Best wishes,
Miss Milena
well done