Hi Mabishan,
Well done on writing such a spooky story. I found it a bit confusing as you jumped from present to past tense and that would be something you could improve on in the future.Was it a vampire count like Count Dracula? I’m glad it proved to be just a nightmare. Keep up the good work.
Mrs O’ Sullivan.
Wow! What a creepy way to respond to the prompt. I love the way you slowly build up the tension.
Next time make sure you check your tenses before you publish, you’re jumping from the present to the past.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs Moore
Hi Mabishan,
Well done on writing such a spooky story. I found it a bit confusing as you jumped from present to past tense and that would be something you could improve on in the future.Was it a vampire count like Count Dracula? I’m glad it proved to be just a nightmare. Keep up the good work.
Mrs O’ Sullivan.