The Plan by Pasupathi Sivaruban

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5 Responses to The Plan by Pasupathi Sivaruban

  1. surea says:

    good work you plan is amazing good work

    anojan.s .a

  2. szabo says:

    this is very good but your lines are too far apart.

  3. awans says:

    great work of making the reader want to know more of what happened. maybe put more description instead of speech:D

  4. Jackie Cameron says:

    Hi Pasupathi,
    Your use of the word ‘unenthusiastically’ set the scene right from the start and reading on, it’s no wonder poor AJ feels so flat. This is such a sad story.
    Thanks for sharing this emotional writing.
    Jackie (team 100WC)
    New Zealand

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