I like how you added suspense to your story ;]
Hi Robert, thanks for this super 100WC story.You created a real impression of urgency at the start and built it up throughout. The end was such a surprise! As a reader I want to know what happened? great ending on a cliff hanging mystery!
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I like how you added suspense to your story ;]
Hi Robert, thanks for this super 100WC story.You created a real impression of urgency at the start and built it up throughout. The end was such a surprise! As a reader I want to know what happened? great ending on a cliff hanging mystery!