Well done Furqaan, another great response to the prompt this week and one that has left me dying to know what happens next. You used varied language well, just make sure it always works how you’ve used it.
Mrs M
Oh my goodness Furquaan, what a fabulous piece of writing, full of suspense and great use of interesting vocabulary. Throughout your piece you have shown that you have a good understanding bout ways to use punctuation in a clever manner – well done!
When you get a chance, come along to New Zealand and look at my class blog at https://rakau19.edublogs.org/
Ms M #100WC
Wow Furquaan – you have quite a way with words! You have really set the scene for a very suspenseful piece of writing. I am looking forward to sharing it with my class.
Keep up the fantastic writing.
Mrs Horan (Team 100WC, Morrinsville, New Zealand)
Well done Furqaan, another great response to the prompt this week and one that has left me dying to know what happens next. You used varied language well, just make sure it always works how you’ve used it.
Mrs M
Oh my goodness Furquaan, what a fabulous piece of writing, full of suspense and great use of interesting vocabulary. Throughout your piece you have shown that you have a good understanding bout ways to use punctuation in a clever manner – well done!
When you get a chance, come along to New Zealand and look at my class blog at https://rakau19.edublogs.org/
Ms M #100WC
Wow Furquaan – you have quite a way with words! You have really set the scene for a very suspenseful piece of writing. I am looking forward to sharing it with my class.
Keep up the fantastic writing.
Mrs Horan (Team 100WC, Morrinsville, New Zealand)