The failed mission

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1 Response to The failed mission

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Brindan,

    You immediately drew me into your writing with your clever use of language that created a tense atmosphere. This is something talented writers do.
    Next time try to vary your sentence starters.
    Mrs M

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