Hi Brindan,
You immediately drew me into your writing with your clever use of language that created a tense atmosphere. This is something talented writers do. Next time try to vary your sentence starters. Mrs M
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Hi Brindan,
You immediately drew me into your writing with your clever use of language that created a tense atmosphere. This is something talented writers do.
Next time try to vary your sentence starters.
Mrs M