That is impressive work Rayyan.you. Good use of vocabulary , try to avoid repetition of the words. Mum
Hi Rayyan I really enjoyed your 100WC. You have written something which is quite ordinary but has an extraordinary ending. This created a sense of suspense which is great. Mrs P (Team 100WC) Wellington, New Zealand
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That is impressive work Rayyan.you. Good use of vocabulary , try to avoid repetition of the words.
Mum
Hi Rayyan
I really enjoyed your 100WC. You have written something which is quite ordinary but has an extraordinary ending. This created a sense of suspense which is great.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand