Hi Shayaan,
I really liked your story. You have done a great job this week. Your story is full of suspense and I was really hoping that you held on!
You ended your story leaving me wanting to read more. Great work.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin, Ireland
Good use of suspense, maybe add a little bit more information
Hi Shayaan,
I really liked your story. You have done a great job this week. Your story is full of suspense and I was really hoping that you held on!
You ended your story leaving me wanting to read more. Great work.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin, Ireland