The fearful death

2 Responses to The fearful death

1. hussj says:

   March 11, 2020 at 8:39 am

   Good use of suspense, maybe add a little bit more information

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2. Cliona Brennock says:

   March 18, 2020 at 11:09 am

   Hi Shayaan,
   I really liked your story. You have done a great job this week. Your story is full of suspense and I was really hoping that you held on!
   You ended your story leaving me wanting to read more. Great work.
   Ms Brennock
   Team 100 w/c
   Dublin, Ireland

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