The fearful death

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2 Responses to The fearful death

  1. hussj says:

    Good use of suspense, maybe add a little bit more information

  2. Cliona Brennock says:

    Hi Shayaan,
    I really liked your story. You have done a great job this week. Your story is full of suspense and I was really hoping that you held on!
    You ended your story leaving me wanting to read more. Great work.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin, Ireland

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