Hi Ryan, This was certainly an action-packed response to the prompt this week; your use of dialogue really brought your characters to life. Next time don’t forget to report who said what so your reader doesn’t get confused. Well done. Mrs M
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Hi Ryan,
This was certainly an action-packed response to the prompt this week; your use of dialogue really brought your characters to life. Next time don’t forget to report who said what so your reader doesn’t get confused.
Well done.
Mrs M