Oh my goodness, what a fabulously tense and exciting story! That ending just left me wanting to know more.
My only suggestion would be to look over your punctuation before you hit publish.
Karin Poole
VA Beach
USA
I really enjoyed reading this action-packed and quite terrifying response to the prompt. Your clever ending left me on tender hooks; this is something talented writers do! Well done. I agree you need to check punctuation before you publish
Mrs M
Oh my goodness, what a fabulously tense and exciting story! That ending just left me wanting to know more.
My only suggestion would be to look over your punctuation before you hit publish.
Karin Poole
VA Beach
USA
I really enjoyed reading this action-packed and quite terrifying response to the prompt. Your clever ending left me on tender hooks; this is something talented writers do! Well done. I agree you need to check punctuation before you publish
Mrs M